I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, 28 November 2017
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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I really like what you for me I like it the most.
ReplyDeleteGood Afternoon Makaea,
ReplyDeleteYour letter to Shyne looks so cool! I really like how you put a lot of effort into this activity and made your letter seem like it's actually written on an old used paper! You are very clever!
When you are in an awful and boring situation, even 1 minute feels like a year! It's funny because when you are excited and enjoying your time, the time flies so quickly that an hour feels like a minute!
Wow imagine how you would've felt when you are actually in that situation: You are in a crowded boat, you can barely eat anything, your friends are not with you, you don't have anything else to play with, and you are told that you have to wait one more month to land! I would have cried...
Your writing is very descriptive and you have really good imagination and good with putting yourself into someone else's shoes. I can't wait to read your creative writings later on!
Have a great day,
Jade C.