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Monday 16 October 2017

100 Word Challenge week 1 term 4

Social Experience at local park.
At Blossom Meadows a social experience was held. Davy Grey a local T.V host did a social experience. What would you do if you saw legs coming out from the pond. Would you be a person that helps, or will you walk away and say you didn’t see anything?  The first person was Nancy Baker who worked at the town bakery, she walked past and noticed something in the water. She screamed and before she could ring the police Davy and his crew stopped her. “I was so frighted it’s such a nice town what could've happened?” said Nancy.
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  1. Mrs. Trivedi-Ziemba (Team 100 WC)22 October 2017 at 08:20

    Makaea,

    I like the way you replied to prompt by describing a social experiment. I wonder why Mr. Davy & his crew stopped her before she rung police. Was it because they were afraid for her mental health or a person stopping to look was enough for them? I wonder what would next 10 people will do. Don't you?

    Let me know if you decide to develop this as a short story or novel.

    Best wishes.

    Mrs. Trivedi-Ziemba (Team 100 WC)

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